EDITING PRACTICE: CHECKING FOR ERRORS IN A COVERING LETTER

Read the following word-processed covering letter for a job.  There are 10 errors.
Work with a partner to find the mistakes and correct them.
     P.O. Box 61
     Haramaya University
     Dire Dawa
     ETHIOPIA
Ms Susan Smith
Head of personnel
Millenium International College
P.O. Box 95
Harar
ETHIOPIA
Dear Mrs Smith
application for the post of Head Secretary to the College Dean
I would like to apply for the post of Head Secretary to the Dean which I see
advertised in ‘The Reporter’ of 29 September 2007.  I have been a secretary at
Haramaya University since 1997 and I have worked as Head Secretary for the Dean
of the Faculty of Education since October 2004.  Please find attached my curiculum
vitae which indicates my qualifications to date and my experience relevant to this
post  I would be willing to attend an interview at any time suitable for you.
Thank you very much in advance for considering my application and I look forward
hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Fasika Ahmed  
Fasika Ahmed
Enc  CV